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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Beautiful poem..

and a very nice illustration... read slowly I just managed to pick out all the words. A slight change to the contrasting colors would have been a tad better.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Powerful words. A pity you couldn't get a better contrasting color for the type; would be easier to read.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Shattered.

Hearts once open and given ~ can be shattered like glass by broken promises ~ callous actions. Lovely illustration but the print a bit difficult to read.

Jennifer CJennifer Cabout 19 years ago
Nice poem

But I too Had difficulty in reading some of the words due to the colour, Again A nice poem though ~ J

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
this poem

is mentioned in the new poems reviews.

~DeepAsleep

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