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mxslicer
mxslicer
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Beginning of the end is here
Eyes unneeded to see
Shedding too many a tear
Yearning to be free


Alone in the night
While your next to me
Absent from the fight
Until a heart no longer weeps for thee


River in drought
Bed becomes sand
Drowned in doubt
Taste turned bland


Too long the status quo
Changing to the same
Opaque the glow
Censure and blame


Await the carnage of the end
By the dearth of touch devastated
Already it is myself whom I depend
All these years wasted

mxslicer
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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A sad look at the past.

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
good tone....

and the message i can relate to. i especially like the *quo and glow* of the rhyme. over all...nice job......don

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
wasted?

if you look back and think you have wasted your life, then that is when it is time to fix it.

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Beautifully written

I can only echo RhymeFairy's comment,

such a sad poem written so elegantly.

River in drought

Bed becomes sand

Drowned in doubt

Taste turned bland

Wonderful Imagery,

more pls!

Thanks.

~ Jenn

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Beautiful

River in drought

Bed becomes sand

Drowned in doubt

Taste turned bland

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Beautiful imagery.

Such heartbreak.

Sadness.

Love this sad lil poem.

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