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Click hereI want to go back to when you touched my face with tenderness,
but all I feel is the aching of where you reached in and pulled my heart
from my chest and crushed it with your indifference.
I want to relive that first moment when I met you and the feeling of
being bathed in warm sunlight by your smile,
but all I feel now is a coldness that won't leave my aching bones
I want to replay all the words and actions, over and over again in my mind,
the when, the where, the why,
all the moments we shared .......
without warning and unknown cause
YOU changed .....
and all the sweet words, moments that we shared
everything that was once special,
are what now ???
each memory of those moments spent with you
every kiss and caress
every gesture or action
is an invisible wound that no one can see and only I can feel.
Tears flow from my eyes that once smiled at the thought of you,
my head aches and pounds at all that I shared and laid bare
before you,
and the love in my heart,
has nowhere to go
it continues to pump and beat on
like a marching drum,
for my heart never knew
that all that I offered and gave you
was part of a game
that you played .....
where you failed to tell me all the rules
Loved the way you expressed the memories and the pains that tend to blend together after a heartbreak. Great effort & I agree - some very good lines.
This poem reminds me very much of the year I've had...loving and losing, wanting to and not wanting to replay moments. How intense human emotions are, how deep and lovely.
from my chest to crush it with your supreme indifference !!!
----immortal killer lines : excellent [ 5-ed] .