- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Broken Hearted
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Click hereHow can she tell him,
About all the things,
That he's done wrong,
The things she'd rather forget,
Inside her heart is breaking,
And yet he won't be able to fix it,
If only she had a pair of wings,
She could fly away,
The pain seems unbearable,
But her tears stop,
The sun shines brightly mocking her,
Making all her worries seem trivial,
She can't break away,
Her heart cries for freedom,
SHe wants to be loved,
Cherished, or just needed,
A new day, a new Bruise,
And yet it's only emotional,
Just because you can't see them,
Doesn't mean their not there.
- COMMENTS
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoit sounds like the heart is in turmoil. Nicely done. I would like to mention the last line. "Doesn't mean their not there." It seems like the two words clash, being that they are close together (their and there). Maybe you could use "Doesn't mean they ain't there" or "Doesn't mean they are not there" etc.
