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- Brusque Interlude
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Click hereTwisting
Squirming
Undulating
Within my mind
Seduce me
Use me
Abuse me
Then leave me behind
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- COMMENTS
2 Comments
Senna Jawaover 20 years agoFlat
A few trite words, without any interesting meaning (no eye openers), "adorned" by trivial rhymes.
Anonymousover 20 years agoPromises......
...but didn't quite hit it for me. I wanted more to round it off. Why the mind games of the first three lines. It's a bit like opening a book to find the first 100 pages are missing. Keep writing tho', it's good.
