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Buk's Parking Lot


A great evening
A nice dinner
a beautiful sushi selection
with an equally good bottle of wine

Conversation, as always
flowing like the rain coming down upon us
soaking through us
like the dog towel we used for an umbrella

We smiled, a lot
it was all too easy
always was
and our waitress
sensing the flow
played with us as well
and then
sensing even more
left us alone

We left the restaurant
content and happy
walking to her car
we smiled
we drove back to my hotel
my hand finding her neck
stroking her
reminding both of us
of the electricity between our bodies
my ignorance showing through
as I said goodnight
expecting a hug
one that as always
lasted too long
but not long enough
never long enough
not tonight though

Tonight there was no hug
tonight there was a surprise
she was on me
kissing me
my god, kissing me
blowing my mind
as my socks flew from my feet
my mind spinning
out of control
mouths touching
tongues tangled
finding my way to her neck
her shoulder
her breast
offered to me
my tongue tasting every part of her
tickling her belly button
but no lower
we touched
each other
we touched all of each other
all over each other
it was the touching
I hoped it would never end
so many things
even rain drops of window washer fluid
Morrissey, singing us through,
the passion of Buk's parking lot

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