Bull Feathers & Chocolate

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susansnow
susansnow
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Ego-tripped so hard I felt responsible for gas prices. Thought long and hard about long and hard. The black bottom hallways and work rooms with no windows. The pills intrusions and endless questions. Far as I know animal packs don't hold interventions for their more uncoventional members. I thought about the canines again the teeth of beasts and the pinky toes of a wolf.

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susansnowsusansnowover 9 years agoAuthor
Prufrock

Great pseudonym. Thank you for your feedback; I'm flattered. I may have some words for your work too. :)

PrufrocknrollPrufrocknrollover 9 years ago
Left Turn at Albuquerque

This poem, like many of yours, takes me on a ride to a destination I never can anticipate. I get lost in your poetry. I stumble into walls, tear apart words and phrases that echo confounding reverberations I can’t quite place-- while carefully placed silences glimmer with hints. For Instance, I love how the reader is dropped into the work as if from a vacuum; the poem roars ahead, while my mind is lost in space. I read and listen for traditional markers, but am left with the directions of my own imagination... and the desire to come back to it. Great work!

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsover 9 years ago
Again

I love how you twist and turn a phrase.