- Erotic Poetry
- burning the nails
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Click here...breaking you at the
bit:
the firm sounds
commanding at you:
taking a number
and shaping you
by the wrists:
spilling the letters
and bringing you
to the edge and
the ends:
your face dissolving
from stoic guess
to an underlying place
grinding you
with the choices
un-earthed from your moans:
dissolving your face
into the beleagued space
as your mind enters the
sands
as your tongue reaches against
the taunt reasons
breathing across the glacier
lakes
of fire and treasons.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 20 years agostyle of writing. Very moody, great choice of words and imagery
"beleaguer, beleagued : to besiege by encircling, as with an army or surround on all sides."
I had no probs with my Webster ;)
YDDalmost 20 years agoWhere did you find "beleagued "
Google doesn't seem to know it.
Did you pull the "r"s out of your word,
or vice versa?
I like your closing phrase:
"breathing across the glacier
lakes
of fire and treasons."
