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So now we sit there,
Half Moon, late Thursday,
halfway to closing time.
Burning fat and chewing midnight oil,
as if the three digit Mickey Mouse
novelty wall clock
(stuck at five past eleven)
would poltergeist it's broken ass
into motion again.

It's Niki's night at the coats
and Siòbhan behind the bar.
Works of intricate art, hips, legs,
circular seduction, 24 carat
carafe curves, robed sparse
and snug for sin.

Golden brown versus glacier cream.
Lolita sub flutter versus sultry come hithers.
All masks of course -
but free mental fuck meat
no more than able to sit slack jawed
feedback looped
to the devious angelic display.
Because really, who could look away?

So willingly, perfectly planned,
basking in the glow
of hardcore fantasies radiating
from every stool and table -
and let us bleed there
on the edge of divinity, drowning
desire in gallons
of whatever swill they pour.

But as much as imply to extend
visual leching to physical probes,
and you will leave within the minute,
broken finger and empty wallet richer.
A death defying sweet
succulent strawberry smile
and an kiss on the cheek
bidding you farewell - for now.

One might think that would deter,
but Half Moon, late Friday,
when Niki works the bar
and Siòbhan the hangers -
we're all back, broken, band-aided
for another night of this.

Irish girls know their thing,
while we know jack shit
and sing along.

// Kacper 1997 //

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WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
great poem

with some really great phrases. Love all the images.

*No longer using the thermometer.

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
I love it.

Nicely done. Free flowing yet deft use of word and image. I used to go to this place, not sure I appreciated you reminding me- a bit too familiar.

One thing- should the "an" before kiss be "a"? It stopped me for a sec, and interrupted the flow.

LiarLiarover 19 years ago
A good snapshot.

In contrast, I found this to be a very uplifting poem. I think it's not meant as a reflection on anything but a snippet of life, and as a snippet, I found it quite charming. I know bars like that, and the patrons that night after night, in half jest, declare their undying love to it's strong, but seductive icons.

BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyover 19 years ago
you know..

i read this and sat here thinking how meaningless our lives can sometimes be.

the poems written well, but it's how it left me feeling.

oh hell maybe i felt that way before i even read it! ~wink~

nice!

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