Calling Mr. Rhythm

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Calling Mr. Rhythm,

With my apologies for the disguise
line breaks
and persistence of timing
down-flowing boundries
over into
the
next
page
of
discovery

your pattern figured proper
high road high
tower high society
planner

Me common as mud
pattern, splatter on glass
scattered spray shower perceptions

Shotgun bullseye, what is the prize?
you come straight to the point.

Don't even remember what mine was anymore.

Signing off,
Ms. Rain

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
ALL SOUND AND VIBES HAVE RHYTHM

the Beat is there for all to discover, TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Light amusing feel to the piece; shows humor and wit with that ending.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Another musical

delight. No apology here, this one sings...

jim :)

Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndeabout 20 years ago
Jazzy feel

Perfect structure and pace, so adequate to the content. Ingenious.

LiarLiarabout 20 years ago
Mr Rhythm answered?

He must have, this poem has such a cool pace.

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