cane with shell handle

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perfect fit
in my sleep
during warm swimming
strong legs
mine, hers, everyone
having a back stroke
calm and dreamy

prisms cast their glints
hard against the ceiling
like hand ball players smack
slimmest sound, economy of violent
whack and caress in time,
movement and vector space
other useless formula and knowledge
3 4 5 ratio is how we have love

ingrown spiral
talking smart in order to impress
the artist who does not know
it’s her
all about

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
TO CAPTURE AN ESSENCE

of a souls knowledge. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A bit abstract and cerebral, but how's that new when speaking of Mr. Smith.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A bit abstract and cerebral, but how's that new when speaking of Mr. Smith.

LiarLiarabout 20 years ago
revel in variations

Some people have all the bloody talent. :) This poem goes from careful beauty, to imaginative similies, to geomentry, to word play... And it's done as effortlessly as the best poets out there handle one, maybe two tools of expression at the same time.

AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
This is very beautiful

lots of food for thought in it. anyway the poem impresses without trying. :)

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