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- cape fear, a.m., weaving
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Click herethe small, round stone
sighs around
in the brisk offshore breeze
draws an asymmetric Celtic knot,
twisted, tight,
in wet sand's flat cloth
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Tsothaalmost 10 years agoThe first stanza has a clear image for me, a small round stone being carried by wind. I'm having trouble seeing the second, though. How can a single stone possibly create the pattern you're describing?
Oldbear63almost 10 years agoYep
I can hear it, see it, smell it. Been away from the ocean too long. Well done.
