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VonTesla
VonTesla
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He sings me to sleep in another man's voice...
The nectar of his words pouring in through
my eyes,
my ears,
illuminating the murky waters of my soul.
I bathe here in this glowing wall of
perfect prose and lyricism,
ignoring the left brain for a moment.
I roll the sweet words off my limbs and down my stomach,
sitting deeper into the pool he made for me...
I turn into a sudden harsh ticking and find
his words imprisoned by parentheses
Borrowed emotions from another man
to another woman.
He loves me as her through his forefather's words.

VonTesla
VonTesla
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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 9 years ago

Very nice. The powerful first line really set the tone. I'm not sure about "forefather's." I get it, but it seems too antiquated a word in the context of everything else.