Car Trouble

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~hellbaby~
~hellbaby~
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Thanks to the green chevy at the light last night


I was stuck in a rut on the side of the road,
and then you came along
and rescued me.

You stroked your pedal
 and revved up your engine
My high beams lit up
 and I flashed you a view
you grabbed your gear shift
and went into overdrive

 I asked you to jump me,
 and you obliged
when you clamped my terminal
 my battery sparked
 when we  hit the gas  together
my engine began to flood

 your charge ran through me
until you were drained
we idled together
 as we recharged

 Then with me in your blind spot
 we cruised  on down the road.

~hellbaby~
~hellbaby~
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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
WITH A FULL TANK

and a charged battery. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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Nothing like a little help from a man with a hot rod.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
I'll Stop~~~~~~~~~

Hey there ~hb~

a fun little piece

I'll stop to give you a jump

any day...........

Whatever you need

to get your motor goin'

Bet it purrs reeeeeeal fine.......

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Very cool :)

<smiles big>

I love it! You did great! That sounded like some major car trouble. <wink>

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