Carol

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Carol


Lips of warm smiling innocence
Girlish hips and breasts
Long legs, firmly rounded calves and thighs
Downy sun brown skin, scent of young girl
Wind teased hair of honeyed chestnut
Gentle spirit and tender hearted thoughts
Too young for love, yet old enough to care
Meanest hint of passion in your eyes
Mind, full of youthful dreams and virgin hope
Yes, hope
Determination to be you, to do what you could do,
With your man to share a life, raise his children,
be his wife

Young Joy rising in the pool of life

You took all this with you when you left

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
PARTING IS NEVER SWEET

sorrowful yes, tragic for certain painful definitely, TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Well done ~ that last line's a real kicker.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
Carol

I felt the passion of your pen, very nice Scott.

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