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Click hereYeah Kel,
He is a character, sure
just not a main character, you know.
more of a Brad Pitt stoned on the sofa
before he made it big
or the charming bad guy
who gets it early on
straining your allegiance with
the men in white hats
pretty girl,
he is not worth the tickle
of your curl
in the back of his throat
although I am sure at the time
he might seem it
All those years
woman trail of rent free living
must have taught him a thing
or two about keeping them happy
besides in the kitchen
yeah I know you will tell me all about it
someday folded and sealed white
envelope slid under door
until then keep replaying his scenes-
the baby deserting, drug smoking
unemployed insult ass hole
who told you "no"
always with an eye out
for a nicer sofa
give up the idea
of rehabilitating
a man, Kel
love you girl friend
would be your man
if I could,
Lisa
narrative. A bit of a prosy feel that worked well with the form. Nicely trimmed and restrained, well done...
jim : )