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Castles of Love


We met and the earth moved.
We came together and it quaked.
I knew, just knew
This was it.
The one.
We were building forever.
A castle upon the shores of life
That would stand the test of time.

But then I awoke.
I came to see how things really were.
Shifting, unstable
The tide rolled in
Testing the strength of our love.
A castle, yes.
Made of sand.
Washed away too easily.

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