Cautious Heart

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With a friend so pure and innocent
That at times I fell kept in contempt
Just like a fire that rages within me
From my heart which longs to be set free

When I listen at times to a certain song
I would often wonder between right and wrong
I often wonder if she is worthy of my trust
To find out is a definite must

As I remember those in by-gone years
I would often feel fairly close to tears
I remember those who treated me bad
And though angered I feel mostly sad

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Author's note : This happens to be the very 1st piece I ever wrote so I was quite uncertain if it was worth posting or not. I'll take the leap and there fore antticipate what is to come.

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HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
some good material in there...but

you have to do something about those end rhymes

http://www.bing.com/search?q=rhymezone&qs=HS&form=QBLH&pq=rhyme&sc=8-5&sp=1&sk=&ghc=1 ...has all the rhymes you'll ever want to use, No vote, but that's not such'a bad thing here