- Erotic Poetry
- Celestial Breeze
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Click hereCelestial Breeze
Her scent rode the chilled winter breeze,
Settling in the home of his mind,
Visions of breathe tossed willow curls,
Tangled, meshed.
Milky Way splashed shoulder,
Star hopping tongue,
Cradled cosmos,
Star dust breasts,
Giant Reds,
Nipples rising out of the nebula,
Pulsing, searching,
Celestial desire.
Spiral Galaxy of forbidden passion,
Chasing meteors,
Engrossing elliptical hips,
Streaming home,
Tongue, fingers, mouth, heart, soul,
Suckling lost secrets,
Quasar between her legs.
Two as one,
Black Hole of living,
Midnight sun,
Center of the moon,
Rising, imminent face of God.
Her scent rode the chilled winter breeze. . .
dlt © Jan. 2 2005
- COMMENTS
Bill Dadaover 18 years agoTongue, fingers, mouth, heart, soul,
Suckling lost secrets,
Quasar between her legs.
There is no better place to search for lost secrets.
ty,bd
MirrorPoetabout 19 years agoYes, you've got it all here. VERY sensual and warming. Liked much. :)
sandspikeover 19 years agoAfter a lovely start I ran into a heated middle and finished
with panting breath. I like this picture. Never made this
connection before.
WickedEveover 19 years agoThis is a great sounding line: "Visions of breathe tossed willow curls" Is is suppose to be breathe or breath? I guess it could work either way. Though, breath sounds nicer in that line.
twelveooneover 19 years agoyou scare me
I scare myself for liking this
"Star dust breasts,
Giant Reds,
Nipples rising out of the nebula,"
it is a good thing it will be cloudy tonight, I would be tempted to look
are you sure you weren't writing about me?
"Settling in the home of his mind,"
'cept my mind is homeless now, can I live in yours?
Seriously, this does strange things to your mind.
