- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Charlie
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Click hereCome on, Charlie
And bring that black scarf with you
You know the one, Charlie
With the threads unraveling
And the edges frayed
Don't be shy, Charlie
You have nothing to hide
I know you too well
Both the angel and the devil
I have felt your love
And have suffered your wrath
I crave for your touch
As I touch the blue flame
Each caress was heaven
Each slap was hell
You look upset, Charlie
Surely you knew this
Perhaps I have said too much
But worry another day
The past is behind us
Only the now exists
Come on, Charlie
Bind my wrists
And steal my sight
Take my sanity, but make me whole
I won't tell a soul
Just for old time's sake, Charlie
- COMMENTS
WickedEveover 15 years agoThe first five lines of the poem offer the reader promises of more good poetry to come. But after the those first lines, the poem doesn't quite deliver. The poem starts doing too much "telling" and doesn't really show the reader any images. This one is still worth an edit. I think it has potential to be a much better poem. Thanks for sharing.
