tagNon-Erotic PoetryChasing Love

Chasing Love

byVampiric_Mirage©

Deceptive magician
Sawing my heart in half
Promising me it won’t hurt
Leaving me with only smoke & mirrors.

Juggling my heart, my body, my sanity
Tender talent leaving me breathless
Foolishly I believed
You would never let me shatter.

Escape artist extrordinairre
How was it you were able
To escape the ties of love
Leaving me behind
Bound to your memory.


*Hey! Thank you to everyone who gave feedback on the original poem, it was really appreciated. As you may or may not notice, the ending is completely different (whether it is better or not I don't know). Please keep commenting & voting) Thanx!

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