child of a lotus

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bluerains
bluerains
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The Blue Lotus

fire child traveler
fettered in the awakening
looks beyond the knowledge
through the web of desires
to the moments when
the beauty of a lotus
opens silently
and blooms
in the heart of a flame

 
 The Lotus

 Each night you appear stretching forth your
 unfolded lotus petals allowing me
 to touch the essence of your lush alluring
 garden without resistence .You have taken
 root in my soul. Now I too, am in bloom

bluerains
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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Have to second those thoughts from YDD; that second piece is HOT!

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Have to second those thoughts from YDD; that second piece is HOT!

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Cool, Smooth....

Very peaceful, yet erotic if you think about it.....

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Lovely

use of the lotus and all it's meaning.

creation, love, enlightenment...

not to mention the sexual aspects

great poem that can be read and understood on many levels

you continue to impress

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
2 Flowers for the price of 1

Both are enjoyable to read, but I prefer the second. However I would call it "erotic", the traditional metaphor demands it.

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