Chinese Water Torture

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duckiesmut
duckiesmut
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He always finds
a way to draw her
out of what she
knows is right-

to wheedle
just enough
to win her
over-

to nuzzle
just enough,

there,

on the nape
of her neck,

and she caves
like a falling rain
of tiny pebbles-

slow at first
like sand sliding
in a misty shower,

then more,

and the rocks
grow bigger
than all his thoughts
inside her head,

driving her insane.

duckiesmut
duckiesmut
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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hello

Nice to see you still about. I think of you every so often. Hope you are happy, healthy and well.

~ brightie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
the torture is sublime

is it not? missed you babe. good to see your work again. as another has said, your readers have indeed missed you.

fancyface_418fancyface_418about 16 years ago
A Wish...

To have One who made me feel that way...His strength, His voice, His touch enveloping me. The very depth of Him piercing my soul.

Miss seeing you duckie, *hugs*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
still here...

I have been missing you. -Russ

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
~~

It seems to just scream out for two more words at the end:<br>

<br>

<i>with pleasure</i><br>

<br>

though it works so much better with them implied.

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