Christmas Time In Shady Pine, USA

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dedicated to Sutton the Red and my brother Chris, out on probation

I grew up here amid the trailers
outside this backward Oregon town;
Ever since I was two
they been tearin the mountain down:
now they're building mansions
and boasting of the view.

My little red-headed pal and I
would play cowboys and Indians;
though there was plenty of shootin'
only plastic died:
the other night he called me
(sloshed from a bar)
soon he's off for Iraqi front lines
where the modern Indians are.

My other buddy was a wild one,
wouldn'ta backed down from a gun,
just a lad in Texas,
Chris Siens he fought the law;
they locked him up in prison
but you tell me who won.

A few miles away there's a billionaire
with gold and silver in his hair:
he commits evil crimes around the world
and the law don't seem to care;

I knew his grandsons Adam and Matt:
the first was one beautiful cat,
the other was a brilliant brat
as narrow-minded as a rat.

It's almost Christ-mas
and what would that gentle Jew think?
he'd redden the whole of Crater Lake
and drink...
and drink...
and drink.

Once upon a time
I visited Thai Bangcock,
twas truly, hellishly sad:

Fire burned every street and dock,
tormenting the good and the bad:
the truly wicked,
whether their skin was yellow or fair,
shared cool brothel air
and whether they spoke English, French or Cantonese,
they each ate from an ivory dish...
as a hungry peasant girl
labored on her knees

So wave them stars and stripes,
vote for the party of Clinton, Bush, or Blair,
and string up miles of merry colored light;
cause that wild hermit Nietzche
had one thing right:

God is dead
Democracy's sun is setting:
art, might, and wile
shall rule the coming super-human night

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
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first stanza the best, interesting use of rhyme, don't know if Shady Pine is a real name, but great town name for the poem. I would do away with "gold and silver in his hair", otherwise this puts the X back in Xmas.

AngelineAngelineover 16 years ago
It's a dark poem

maybe too dark for my preferences, but it has so many strong narrative features that it's a powerful statement.

Your poem has been recommended in the new poems review thread on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.

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