Cimmaron

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By evening the Cimmarron
will flow over me.
Thick, crimson blanket
of tepid water soothing
my eyes and ears
with it's aimless current.
Warmed and comforted
in a cradle of mud
till my form drifts away
from the sun.

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secretgarden07secretgarden07over 16 years ago
Congrats !!

Beautiful imagery and kudos on the award.

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Late congrats on the greenie, though I wonders, who or what is immersed in the water?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I agree.

The green E is well applied. Congrats on a good poem.

Tess

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
An "E"...

that is very well deserved. Leisurely and relaxing flow throughout.

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