- Non-Erotic Poetry
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I thought of you today
when I felt the sting
disapproval
taking its bite
from happiness
A mouthful of weakness
beckoning men
I want
who don’t want me
I thought you’d taught me
not to go there
but you see
here I am
thinking of you
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoJulia, This is so well done, I'm amazed I never read it, let alone left a comment. But back then I was just getting started.
sweet GA peachesover 18 years agothe rain does fall, how oft' we ponder on the ones who forever left a stain on the creases of what remains in the heart....... sgp
Anonymousover 18 years agosomewhat portends the ending, the irony still is cutting.
Nice job.
