Claudine

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She looked at life
Both sides now!

From win
From loose!

From good
From bad!

From love
From hate!

Oh Claudine
You did not learn!

You only looked
Not under-stood!

Our Claudine!

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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I go along with Jim on this one; too mcuh Joni Mitchell. What about Claudine? Also, it should be lose (opposite of win) instead of loose (instead of tight).

jthserrajthserraover 18 years ago
I think a bit too much Joni Mitchell

too little Claudine... the allusion works, but you held on to it too long I think leaving me thinking of the rows and flows of angel hair instead of carrying on with Claudine.

jim : )