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Click hereclose your eyes and half smile
in that way that you do
one side of your neck offered to the sheets
and one side stretching for me to lick
those bracelets all on one wrist
like medals of conquests and troubles
clinking over and over
as your hands do their work
paparazzi in the dim light
click, click, click
my small tongue making you shiver
whilst we melt and sweat puddles between our skins
i'd take you somewhere pretentious
and you could take me anywhere
...but all those tickets marking pages in your books
you were always going somewhere darling
you were always going
now i just want to ride you in the morning
with your hair all scruffy like that
open the blinds
click, click, click
and then let me write a poem for you on your fridge
as i picture you running from me
It's nicely vivid and very personal. I hate the word "whilst" but other than that I couldn't find anything I'd change in here. Very nice work.
I am surprised this poem has no comments. It's an interesting, smart piece.