Climbing

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CLIMBING

By JCSTREET © 2004 020602


Aran sweater, jeans ... she’s
climbing ahead of me
making the pace, inclined
into the soft womb of the rise, I
feel my age as I heavy-breathe
upward in her train, she is
new-love-minted
in the tapestry of my eye
new pulsing
in my dreamscape…….. new
snuffle-kissy in bed

-30- Kingston, Ontario – June 2, 2002

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Following her up the mountain always left me breathless and heavy and saying Yes before I knew what I said Yes to!

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
some wonderful phrasing

in this unique poem. An intriguing climb indeed. Very good.

jim : )

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I love this...

...sweet little verse. It conjures up so many images and leaves us wanting more. Five

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