Clit Split

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Vibrating
my quivering
clit.
Rosebud lips
peaked
open,
begging
for more.
So much
more.
Round
Round
Dipping round.

Grinding hips
shimming
a shake.
Hotness
seeping.
Roving tongue
teasing, while
pouty lips
get their
pleasing.

Tongue
of silver,
turns
forked now.
Clit,
split
lickity split.
Spit

Spit

Spit

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DonAbdulDonAbdulabout 18 years ago
Awesome

Wow! This is just awesome. A few very effective choice words, mmmm.

Love it.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Are we talking fast food here? Finger lickin' good. Very fun and very hot read RF.

ty,bd

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A good Sunday wake em up...

(I know - I'm running late - tastes good anyway)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot!

Hot poem! I loved the way the words flowed in your poem, mirroring the images you created. Great stuff!

jthserrajthserraover 18 years ago
the short lines

and repetition add a pace to the poem which is effective, but I found the wording more about mechanics than sensation or intimacy, more telling what is happening than showing what is being experienced. I read a narrative rather than being drawn into the words. I think if rather than describe what is happening, try to express what is being felt emotionally and physically, if you work toward that you can draw your reader into the poetry.

jim : )

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