- Erotic Poetry
- Close your eyes
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Take a deep breath, what do you smell?
The sweet sent of my cotton candy mist
Run your fingers down my body, what do you feel?
My soft sun kissed skin
Kiss my lips, what do you taste?
My cherry lip gloss you bought me for my 18th birthday
Hold me tight, what do you feel?
My youthful breasts pressed against your chest
Kiss my neck, what do you notice?
My long brown hair gliding across your face
Lean in and hear me whisper, what do you hear?
Me saying "take me"
Run your finger tips down my body again, what do you feel?
My curvy hips that want to be grabbed
Run your finger tips down deeper, what do you feel?
My clit that is dripping wet
Lay on your back, what do you feel?
My thick legs straddling your soft body
Slip your cock ever so deep in me
Now, tell me what you feel?
- COMMENTS
todski28about 9 years agothe use of the question as a refrain is good, , you could probably cut back a fair bit of this, condense it to increase the impact.
using "my" so many times could be taken out, I keep trying to re-write it problem is then it would be the way I would write it and that is only a guide anyway. If you would like me to show you what I mean let me know.
