- Erotic Poetry
- Clothes
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The marks of her clothes
slowly fade from her body
as I watch and she falls
solemnly asleep.
There’s been no sex
for she was tired,
and in the clammy night
there are no sheets,
so unfettered limbs
reveal their weals,
the blueprint of
her public form.
- COMMENTS
Hyadesabout 13 years agoWhat you related here is so true. The love comes through the eyes of those beholding the woman sleeping. The marks left by clothing will disappear but not the love of two people. That in itself is erotic.
avrgblkgrlalmost 14 years agoI liked this because it was so simple and uncluttered. It captures a very erotic moment~watching ur lover sleep naked, bare, honest, the way only you know them. I like that they did not have sex.
buttersover 14 years agojust to let you know your poems have been reviewed today over on Lit's poetry forum. Please visit this link to read what's been said about your pieces:
http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=32697289&postcount=2894
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