- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Cold at heart
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Click hereAll this time I've been wondering,
Why we came this far?
All this way for nothing,
And the people are skiing on.
Resorts for your loving,
Drinks are at the bar,
Spend all night discovering.
What people are.
There must be some way round this insanity,
I just can't go on.
Trends are just disgusting me,
And the people are skiing on.
The guy at the bar just caught my eye,
She's holding his hand tight.
Dreaming of what he'll do to me,
I'm planning on taking flight.
He's got me up against the wall,
There's no relief in sight.
I've seen this type of masculinity,
They take you then leave you in the night.
Tomorrow she'll be back with him,
He won't know where she's been.
Left between the covers,
But I'm just skiing on.
- COMMENTS
Remecover 10 years agoI think I liked it, but the verses seemed to want to have a regular rhythm that kept getting thrown off. A more established pattern to the beats would also,, it seems to me, to help with the whole "skiing on" imagery being set forth.
