- Non-Erotic Poetry
- cold chills
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Click hereScreaming but no one can here
I am surrounded yet alone
Unfamiliar faces
Same tear traces
So I see more empty souls
On a constant float
And you get cold chills
You don't have to look around
because Thats when I am near
For I once I was a spirit
Who is now a ghost
Searching for a home
but I see more empty souls
so I am surrounded yet alone
Unfamiliar faces
familiar tear traces
and all i feel is more empty souls
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoNice twist with words here but could use some tweaking, as in a final edit to check the spelling {hear instead of here} and some word placement. Very promising.
WickedEvealmost 20 years agoOn a constant float
And you get cold chills
Keep writing and sharing. :)
twelveoonealmost 20 years agoThis is a twist with interest, could be developed a little more
"For I once I was a spirit
Who is now a ghost"
