Color My Beach

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high tide low tide
my butt outside
under an umbrella
reflecting a rainbow

my pot of gold filled with ice
chilling the amber and green
longneck queens opened and enjoyed
with great anticipation
and loads of appreciation...

for kaleidoscope golden girls
highlighting a brilliant day

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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As much as I enjoy a good red wine, it can't compete with a cool longneck when I'm at the beach enjoying its color.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Oh, yes

other than that - your verse is perfect

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
No, no, no, no, no, no, no

Choice of beverage is ALL wrong,

You need something more full bodied;

deep, deep red and potent

so you'll walk on water

and float on sand

never noticin'

your skin's redder'n the settin' sun

WickedEveWickedEveover 18 years ago
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great beach poem. good writing. :)

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