- Erotic Poetry
- Come For Me
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Click hereIn my hearts winter
Hides desire
And passion sleeps
I wait for you
Waiting for our breaths to mix
To burst into flames
Night blankets the sky with stars
Under the glistening blanket
Naked, I lay waiting
For you to consume me
To warm me with your touch
To revive me with your fire
Dawn lights the winter morn
As I lust for your warmth
I want you inside
Devouring my mouth
Tongue dancing with tongue
Skin sliding against silken skin
Plunge through the frozen mist
Satisfy pleasures, wants, and needs
Release me
Show me the alter of lust
Climb higher to the edge
Come for me.
- COMMENTS
fairysongover 18 years agoAgain you amaze me. Your poem speaks clearly of passion and emotion. Nicely done, Elf!
Belegonalmost 19 years agowith sack, because I feel it will go better with "passion sleeps"...
"desire hides
and passion sleeps"
but it is a minor quibble at best. I like this just fine the way it is.
sackalmost 19 years agoI would only change "hides desire" to "desire hides" to improve readability.
