- Erotic Poetry
- Communion
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Click here(For R – It’s you. It’s always been you.)
i want you inside me
(stretching me
taking me
owning me)
i want to be so full of you, so lost in you
i want that perfect Union that is more…
that goes so far as to be CommUnion
…more than the mere joining of people, of cock and cunt
- but the co-mingling of souls -
so that while you're buried deep in me
(eyes locked
breathless and
dissolving into each other)
we are truly One
half Me and half You
and all Us.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 18 years agoA little too many hackneyed phrases and a little too many porn-like images to be truly erotic but quite hot inspite of that. Nice write.
gotwood49almost 19 years agoWell done, logo...in a few simple lines, you've captured the essence of love and lust and sex and eroticism and the deep feelings that accompany all that...and it took less words to do that, than for me to write about it! You rock, girl!
sackalmost 19 years agoAs usual, I am privileged to read your superb writing! Thanks!
