- Erotic Poetry
- Completion
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She takes her answer
deep,
enthusiastically,
and as she swallows she waits
for completion.
I am not the bringer of perfection.
I wear her expectations
like bitter ice
that denies the sun and remains
unmoved.
And I damn myself
again and again,
as I grab her head
and feed her the seeds
of false religion.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 18 years agoStrong stuff. I like that you managed to convey the eroticism of rough sex without the usual, hackneyed words.
I would remove the "and" in the fourth line.
I'm not sure what you're saying in the second strophe but I like the way it sounds.
Well done.
Tess
