Complicated Girl

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I am a riddle you cannot solve
A song you get stuck in your head but can never remember the words to
I am a book that ends mid-sentence
A negative of a photograph
I am a flower that dies before it blooms
A masterpiece never unveiled
I am a shadow of a ghost
A whispered promise
I am dying words left unspoken
A dream you never fully remember but you never forget
I am a wish never whispered aloud
A sunset fading in your peripheral vision
I am a fading memory
A mystery gone cold
Just a complicated girl

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CleardaynowCleardaynowalmost 10 years ago
Better in third person

This has nice lines but I think would read better in the third person. In the first person it gives a whiff of hubris - even though the first person in a poem does not have to be autobiographical.

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