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~

last night
he finally gave permission
to bring you into my mind,
through compromise,

he brought you as a gift,
a gift he wanted to watch from the side
being opened slow,
low on my knees, hand through denim
smile and lip bite,
unzip, lift and tumble free

for light kiss tease and breathe in
between, until your muscles weak,
you to knees while he greets

I take more than my fair share, again,

hand and knee crawl between,
my bookend lovers, face to face
a reflection in time's mirror-
he demands only your eyes meet his,
in payment for borrowed lips, tongue
the use of my generous mouth

touch is optional, yet you allow
long hands on strong shoulders
for balance as we seek and
find our collective rhythm
crescendo, fortissimo

marimba mallets played with
two hands down spine
woodwind and trombone
mouth and slide
in low between a

supersonic trio,
squeezed like an accordion
air pushing through with whispered song
up to loud orchestra hit

James Brown demands:
"take it to the bridge"

six eyes close
lift and jump in together
landing tangled,

collapsed and floating down
our collective stream

~~

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flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
naughty, naughty, naughty

and printed out for me to enjoy later! Brazen and incredibly sexy, SeattleRain!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
What a compromise

"you" and "he" played a naughty tune for "I" ~_^

tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
I 'm of three minds about this

all satiated and smiling:)

dreamsweetdreamsweetalmost 20 years ago
on the other hand

I like this one just as it is...

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
there's a lot I like in this poem

but I think it's too much. I just feel like it needs to be shorten--not much, just a snip.

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