- Erotic Poetry
- Condensation
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vaporized water
inhaling cleansing
air into my lungs
wiping condensation
from fogged bathroom mirror
unfocused reflection dripping
hands grasping tangled hair
head tilting back
two elbows
two hip bones
two breasts
nose
chin
eyes
all point in your direction
I count them and find
I have lost nothing
water footprints
on the rug
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 13 years agowell done, the whole poem plays off the title. only thing missing
third nipple, or a clown (inside joke) a 5
hippiedudealmost 20 years agoyou brought just about all of my senses into play with this visual and tactile poem.
Maria2394about 20 years agoyour imagery is excellent, you invocaion of that **been there** feeling that makes a poem feel personal--I like that feeling :)
