- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Confectionery
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My oversweet loves
always start
out soft candy hearts
that melt silkily on sleek tongue.
But they puddle when laid
in too much sun
on my carpet, on my bed,
and the long, messy smears of FD&C red
stain shrouds for burial of their dead.
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 15 years agoha,ha,ha.
But they puddle when laid
good enjambment (learn it from me?)
the rest of it goes, where I kind of expect it, and gives me that fires that burn from deep within feeling, if you know what I mean. Except, I'm better at it.
annaswirlsabout 15 years agoMentioned in the New Poem Recommendations thread: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=30341931#post30341931
