- Erotic Poetry
- Conquered
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Click hereTake a stranger
Entangle him with words
Ensnare him with fantasy
Entrap him with longings
Draw him into the web
Imprison him with the mind
Inveigle him with promises
Intrigue him with half-truths
Enjoy his fighting
Straining for release
Screaming in frustration
Struggling against his bondage
Watch as he surrenders
Dropping his head on his chest
Dripping perspiration on his head
Drained he cedes victory
Full submission as expected
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 13 years agoAt the front of the lines, keep thinking that way (structure) . At the end of the lines, think about nouns that are more concrete. Too many words like fantasy, longings, the mind, promises, half-truths, clumped together generate clogged poetic arteries.
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