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Part of me was part of you
you had my sex up close
tongue length to be precise
and you reveled in my pleasure.

Part of me was part of you
pleading to watch me
perform my daily body functions
as you rested your chin on the porcelain commode.

Part of me was part of you
your abysmal fetishes
enraptured me
and I allowed you your fantasies.

Part of me was part of you
though love was not an option
clearly your roving eye
was tempered by my food and lodging.

Part of me was part of you
even as you bled to death
and I vomited on your startled face
sickened by the horrible mess in my kitchen.

Part of you now a part of me
I now wallow in your fetishes
exploiting the aluminum commodes
in this prison of porcelain.

author, little miss blair
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