Consumed

byDawnJ©

Hunger
Rages in me,
Flames shooting skyward,
Immense, unbearable.
I want to burn,
To roar and fall apart
In the bliss.
But you make me go slow,
You enslave me
With your words,
And the fury of your lust
That melts me
Where I am.
Immolated
On the altar
Of your desire,
I wait for you,
Breathless and consumed.

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