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eagleyez
eagleyez
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white Proust frock
blue gray pallets
parchment
cell phones
pagan music
windowsill
sparrows and
respirators on foreheads.

some far off sparkle
keychains and
half a tank of gas
eventually
pudding
like mud
under wagon wheels.

the cleanest sheets
with claystains
where the potato diggin toes at least still have a dirty wiggle.

Faust in long night with quill descending
Bearsdley
hugs the heavenly hips
of midnight while
Napoleon clutches his
soul
between
buttons of gold.

eagleyez
eagleyez
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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Wonderful show of cascading imagery.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
You already know...

...that I love this. Just sayin'.

Oh - and I voted.

no thermometer, now, ever.

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
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you have such a talent for taking language and making it play your tune. approximating rhyme with a tease, you dare us to pause.

I loved this:

"the cleanest sheets

with claystains

where the potato diggin toes at least still have a dirty wiggle."

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
sorry

that was me

: D

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
There

is a tremendous sense of power in these words.

I don't get one image or feeling...but like a slide show there are sudden bursts of sharp well defined pictures that form a very interesting chain.

great language.

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