contemplating silvia plath no.3

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Updated 03/18/2021
Created 04/06/2011
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he had lovers hang stockings
from his Cambridge window
Casanova's victory bunting
the man you wanted
the man all women wanted
the man you got

you planted disappointment
nursed it obsessively, possessively
until it became swollen
bore fruit and started to rot
the soil too rich, the water
too pure

no daddy, daddy was dead
planted in some other ground
some other climate, some other time
the oiuji board couldn't contrive
to resurrect what never was
the spells said simply, die

the folly of a woman, who indulged
in alchemy, your expectations
destined to be thwarted, the man
stubbornly remaining, the man
you chose, the man who
had, earthier ideals

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theognistheognisabout 13 years ago
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Suggestion:

the ouija board couldn't contrive

And:

had earthier ideals

Five.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
A5

provided you are done. This is a nice end. Illustrative of a bit of bizzarro physiology on some women's part. You kiss a toad, think it's a Prince, and get pissed 'cause you get warts.

the man you wanted

the man all women wanted

the man you got

Bog, every time I read "Daddy" , which is good and very powerful, I hear the drug talking.

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