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Here is my first attempt at poetry, let me know what you think:

I want to leave my mark upon you, my presence never forgotten,
Scarred with my feelings, controlled by my thoughts.
Your vulnerable, innocent and divine, a complete controlled tease,
My eyes survey with fiery, burning intent.

Your mind and muscles struggle and fight, naturally resisting my desire.
My spirit and hand leading you to stillness.
White skin seeping to redness, nerved endings sending pain on its journey,
An increase of thankfulness in your voice.

Your knees pressed hard to the floor, dominance more frantic and lustful,
Eyes pleading and begging for everything.
Your skin represents my enthusiasm, your cries my physicality,
Pure feminine devotion.

It is my mind that leads you to submit.

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colddieselcolddieselover 12 years ago
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I would be interested to know why you think this is poetry.

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