- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Conversation With A Freudian Companion
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Click herehis work appeared
before me that day
after years of paranoid dialogue.
today he spoke
about the voices
that used to infiltrate
the corridors of his mind.
i told him,
"your confident voice
is the result
of your effort
that you have put forth
in your fight
to eradicate your soul
from the deceiving
commands that haunted you.
it's not easy
for many of those
that have attempted these steps
like you have."
his eyes filled
with utmost joy
and told me,
"without you taking
up the cause
of this schizophrenia behavior,
this voice wouldn't be
where it is today."
- COMMENTS
sackalmost 19 years agoI think a few more of my brain cells have linked today!
Bridget69about 19 years agoyou've offered a highly intellectual and insightful piece to ponder. Thanks for the brain food.
Wanton Vixxxenabout 19 years agoto the message contained in your poem; much like the one found in a Chinese fortune cookie - only better. This work contains a very poignant meaning within its last few lines especially; driving home the fact that a sore mind sometimes needs that "massage" of another to heal. Wonderful poem, don - perhaps one of My favorites. <smile>
Vixxx
Tathagataabout 19 years agothis might read better if it weren't so choppy.
Maybe extend some of the lines a little longer, make it more conversational.
I like the content alot.
