- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Cosmic Cocktail
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Click hereHe drinks of her world like Drambuie.
Sipping her snifter like essence
slowly into every corner
of his honey milked head...
Sustained by silver strands
from Nirvana hills
and dragon juice, she is
concepts that transcend
the mundane while
tracing the borders
of savage domains.
Through protoplasmic flow
she is a creation play
reflection of the void,
minding the fields of
his boundless garden
fused by his lightning,
hidden by eclipse,
riding his thunder...
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoIt has the feel of creation about it — and God created Woman to keep an eye on Man...
unapologeticabout 17 years agoMentioned on today's New Poem Reviews: http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=22044486#post22044486
unapologeticabout 17 years agoI just love that phrase - dragon juice. It's even better when you say it aloud. I do feel that there's something more you need to do with this poem. Maybe another stanza, or maybe a little editing. I'm not sure. I hate the rating system where a piece can only get multiples of 25, because I'd give this one a 90. It's almost perfect, but not quite.
